As you can see the facial expressions and body language of these people have been made to look agressive and this combined with the angry colours in the background will attract the target audiences attention. When the audience has seen the magazine they will feel encouraged to buy it becuase of the famous bands named clearly at the bottom and in the middle and also the words "unholy alliance" which is a popular concert and people will want to hear the review on it.

This is my latest version of my evaluation which I have improved a lot since last time
http://www.slideshare.net/Gavinreed/improved-evaluation-1315833

I improved my evaluation by adding more detail. This is my improved evaluation http://www.slideshare.net/Gavinreed/improved-evaluation

http://www.slideshare.net/Gavinreed/evaluation-1105711

Improved cover

Mockup page spread (page 2)

I think this page goes well with the first page, however it does look a bit repetitive and again I think the layout could be improved

Mockup page spread (page 1)

Again I like the colours in the background and IU also like the quality of the pictures, However to improve I could make the layout of the page look more interesting.